Heaven can wait

Prompt: Journey
Form: Limerick
Device: Alliteration

Yesterday, a blubbering baby.
Today, a youth of what if and maybe.
A long road awaiting,
a life in the making.
Surrender not till God’s breath leaves me.

Featured image: Photo by Mish Sukharev (CC BY 2.0)

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  1. Serious stuff for a form that usually isn’t, very original and very soulful, well done 🙂

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